CSI assorted editing errors refering to figure "below"

BOKKE submitted by skeptic on Wed, 2008-03-12 10:59. [nid:503]
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3.10.3
‘IT governance touches nearly every area detailed in the figure above.’ changed to ‘IT governance touches nearly every area detailed in Figure 3.7.’
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5.2, Value of processes vs. maturity
of processes
In first paragraph, first sentence, ‘below’ deleted
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5.2, Value of processes vs. maturity
of processes
In second paragraph, the first sentence amended to read:


‘Let’s say that a particular organization has gone through an assessment and has found that three key processes, SLM, Availability and Capacity Management, shown in Figure 5.2, are not very mature.’
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7.2
In the first sentence, ‘…enterprise perspective as show below.’ changed to ‘… enterprise perspective as shown in Figure 7.2.’
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8.5.1, Communication transformation
In second paragraph, ‘The below figure’ changed to ‘Figure 8.3’
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8.5.1, Communication transformation
Second paragraph, last sentence, ‘(see Figure 8.3)’ deleted

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